New work

hB · 05-30-2017, 05:39 PM

Hey all,

Currently I'm in the process of making designs again, I've got some work coming up on a bigger scale than the below, but I thought I would start with some tags in an attempt to get my mojo back!

Just looking for some honest critique..

V1;

V2;

Wolfeh · 05-30-2017, 05:48 PM

It's too clean.

Needs some dirt to give it personality.

4/10.

DEF not your best work, bruh.

hB · 05-30-2017, 05:52 PM

Thanks Wolf

Definitely think I'm lacking depth in this one

**Killer** · 05-30-2017, 06:02 PM

I haven't done anything GFX related in a very long time. Infact, I use photoshop mainly to edit, so I might not have the talent or eye to say anything really constructive, other than that the end result is extremely safe compared to how you once were. Might've taken you some time, but it looks like a quick editing job.

But if you really want the nitty gritty from my perspective:

I really like the lines and cloud effect you got going on. The gradient is dope and the color balance between your whites and reds are light but in tune with your piece. I guess my only issue is with Akuma. He's pretty jarring to what you've established in the background. I like how you blended in the lines into Akuma but at the same time the brightness of the piece makes the shadows of Akuma look extremely out of place. I'm positive it's the picture of Akuma as the focal point that really hurts the piece. I think maybe blending him in more (rather than having him almost appear out of nowhere) would help the piece far more than what you got right now.

**DrunkenMasta** · 05-30-2017, 07:57 PM

Sup.

Lens flare top middle, lines, color and depth.

Long time brother.

hB · 05-31-2017, 07:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Killer

I haven't done anything GFX related in a very long time. Infact, I use photoshop mainly to edit, so I might not have the talent or eye to say anything really constructive, other than that the end result is extremely safe compared to how you once were. Might've taken you some time, but it looks like a quick editing job.

But if you really want the nitty gritty from my perspective:

I really like the lines and cloud effect you got going on. The gradient is dope and the color balance between your whites and reds are light but in tune with your piece. I guess my only issue is with Akuma. He's pretty jarring to what you've established in the background. I like how you blended in the lines into Akuma but at the same time the brightness of the piece makes the shadows of Akuma look extremely out of place. I'm positive it's the picture of Akuma as the focal point that really hurts the piece. I think maybe blending him in more (rather than having him almost appear out of nowhere) would help the piece far more than what you got right now.

Agreed, the Akuma stock I used has this ball ache of design to it.

Thanks Killa

Quote:

Originally Posted by DrunkenMasta

Sup.

Lens flare top middle, lines, color and depth.

Long time brother.

DM, long time indeed bro, was hoping you wouldn't of had to see this crap

Catch up is long over due!

hB · 05-31-2017, 09:48 AM

Updated;

Think I'll leave this one alone and start on something else

Wolfeh · 05-31-2017, 10:23 AM

I like v2.

Huge improvement.

Wolfeh · 05-31-2017, 10:25 AM

Btw I LOVE your txt placement.

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05-30-2017, 05:39 PM	#1
hB Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: London, England Age: 26 Posts: 565 Tournaments Joined: 2 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 57 Rep Power: 4864	New work Hey all, Currently I'm in the process of making designs again, I've got some work coming up on a bigger scale than the below, but I thought I would start with some tags in an attempt to get my mojo back! Just looking for some honest critique.. V1; V2; __________________

05-30-2017, 05:48 PM	#2
Wolfeh Banned Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In the hall of olden dreams Age: 29 Posts: 7,312 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 1337 Rep Power: 0	Re: New work It's too clean. Needs some dirt to give it personality. 4/10. DEF not your best work, bruh.

05-30-2017, 05:52 PM	#3
hB Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: London, England Age: 26 Posts: 565 Tournaments Joined: 2 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 57 Rep Power: 4864	Re: New work Thanks Wolf Definitely think I'm lacking depth in this one __________________

05-30-2017, 06:02 PM	#4
Killer SFO Admin Join Date: Oct 2004 Age: 27 Posts: 7,581 Tournaments Joined: 10 Tournaments Won: 1 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 836 Rep Power: 55984	Re: New work I haven't done anything GFX related in a very long time. Infact, I use photoshop mainly to edit, so I might not have the talent or eye to say anything really constructive, other than that the end result is extremely safe compared to how you once were. Might've taken you some time, but it looks like a quick editing job. But if you really want the nitty gritty from my perspective: I really like the lines and cloud effect you got going on. The gradient is dope and the color balance between your whites and reds are light but in tune with your piece. I guess my only issue is with Akuma. He's pretty jarring to what you've established in the background. I like how you blended in the lines into Akuma but at the same time the brightness of the piece makes the shadows of Akuma look extremely out of place. I'm positive it's the picture of Akuma as the focal point that really hurts the piece. I think maybe blending him in more (rather than having him almost appear out of nowhere) would help the piece far more than what you got right now. __________________ Infinite. She's Coming... And yeah.. I edited an entire GIF

05-30-2017, 07:57 PM	#5
DrunkenMasta Join Date: Dec 2005 Age: 27 Posts: 4,276 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 12 Rep Power: 5067	Re: New work Sup. Lens flare top middle, lines, color and depth. Long time brother. __________________ heartloss. Never Forget. The style, the fashion, the moxy, the passion.

05-31-2017, 09:48 AM	#7
hB Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: London, England Age: 26 Posts: 565 Tournaments Joined: 2 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 57 Rep Power: 4864	Re: New work Updated; Think I'll leave this one alone and start on something else __________________ Last edited by hB; 05-31-2017 at 09:58 AM.

05-31-2017, 10:23 AM	#8
Wolfeh Banned Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In the hall of olden dreams Age: 29 Posts: 7,312 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 1337 Rep Power: 0	Re: New work I like v2. Huge improvement.

05-31-2017, 10:25 AM	#9
Wolfeh Banned Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In the hall of olden dreams Age: 29 Posts: 7,312 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 1337 Rep Power: 0	Re: New work Btw I LOVE your txt placement.

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