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Default Sunday Rap Battles: Head-2-Head (Week 1)

Well, we have 7, maybe 8 hours left before the deadline, and I still haven't finished my set. lol.

As the sets come in, I will update this thread.

First the matchups and rules:

Pakistani [Winner] vs. shad0wslayer
~TR~Robert vs. silver-ken [Winner]
LuXv vs. LiquidSnake78 [Winner]
Not On For Long vs. TitaniumFist [Winner]


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-Don’t reuse content
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Default ~TR~Robert vs. silver-ken

Each set posted in the order they were sent. I will read and vote later.

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Originally Posted by ~TR~Robert
Man why i got to battle Duce
if i win he will cry child abuse
i swear i didn't spike your apple juice
don't blame me if u wake up butt holes feeling loose
If i win Ima shock px like my name was Zeus
Shoving these thunderbolts up your caboose
this ain't story time I ain't mother goose
got so many rhymes you'd think im Dr Suess
feel my words strangling you like a noose

Jump in this battle with your bat "sting"
ima go rock hard call me The Thing
"its clobbering time" is what ill sing
while strangling u with ur own purse string

What kinda man carries a purse anyway
you seem to display your probably ***
or maybe your one of those that goes both ways
Hey i don't judge its okay

Yeah ur gonna say im fat
compared to me ur a gnat
bury you with your own baseball bat
got px asking Where duce at?

so what im 28 least im straight don't hate
mad cause you cant even get a blind date
your a butt pirate looking for his 1st mate
I know you get kinky with them whips
half of px want u on all fours grabbing your hips
**** even Solid asked about them **** sucking lips
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You're an idiot robert, this battle will go accordingly
I'm an eskimo and you're a water salesman, you have nothin in store for me
I'm not all about violence, but he's a phony that's understood
Old forklore tails about heros is the only time you'll see Rob'in hood.
Your time has come that I bury you in this tunnel
A fat guy, it's like jumanji meets rosie o donald
You rapped about potatos, thought it was hot, bwoii your ass is tired
Since you think potato raps are hot, you know your ass is fried
Robert gets robbed by girls, now there's a problem son
A girl chased him with a bat, they said Jackie Robbin'Son.
Here's a little scenario, in case you really don't know.
You can get ouf of pocket, but you'll make yourself look stupid like Romo
I have a machete in my yard so be ready to get scarred
You have a pumpkin in our avy so you knew you were getting carved
Prepare for your funeral, it's unusual what i do to you
You registered in February, valentine day thinking you got heart
It's cool when you fail later, you got off to a lovely start
Let's make fun of your perfect bar, under new member it says P
That means You're a Pathetic Physically Puny Punk Probably
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Old 10-08-2012, 03:33 PM   #3
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Default Not On For Long vs TitaniumFist

Verses as they were written/sent. Haven't read any.

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It's about time, no really. I checked my G-Shock, It's about that time.

I go from tryna battle Shiny and Shadow, to somebody who can rhyme?

Somethings not right, and I'm here wondering if there's some kinda deal?

Because I only ordered stuff off the dollar menu, but got a full course meal?



First round, and I'm already up against a major threat.

I'm a real man so before battle..you know, I'll pay my respect.

So when beat him, nobody can claim me as a villian.

I'm feelin like Fab, how I'm talking about what I'm killin.

Am I supposed to lose to Fist? I guess I'm the underdog?

Man, I'm looking up caskets for the bodies in some catalog.



I was talking to Kenshi, and he said just try and kill em off.

Because I cover all bases, and his bars vs Slayer was hella soft.

So this is about to get rocky because I'm bringing this heat ASAP

You prob thought I'd be an easy win, I see you feel into my trap.

You'd think I was made of steal the way you failed to put a chip in armour. <- UnderArmour

I can beat somebody down without all insults, that's for SSJKarma



Now that it's clear, let's talk. Because I'm wondering some stuff.

Real talk, not that Shiny Latios "I'm on SFO so let's act tough."

You wanted me to face somebody who could nuke me? How?

Why would you pair me with yourself if you wanted that? Really now?

Should have put me up against LS, it could have been a classic.

But you get that shotgun, the sacrificial lamb died kinda tragic.

If I didn't make it obvious, next round I'm calling out LiquidSnake.

The others either suck, or they're just beyond fake for Christ sake.

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Sup, y’all. Who’s up for anotha burst of verse, from the war-forged Hammer of Thor?!

NOFL? Oh, hell. Oh, dear. Another rookie rear ‘bout to say hello to Mjolnir/

Dude, I just stormed Shad0w for darin’ to look in these SnakeEyes/
But at least half his rep was real, even if the other was all lies/

But you? Not tryina be rude, but who the f*** are u dude?/
A no-name, nobody, prolly got banned for his attitude/
S’okay. I don’t’ care ‘bout u’r past, I’m tired, not in da mood/

See, PX is jacked like a bunch a crips. They wanna see me skill you, kill, you spill you, Blood/

I’m serial sperm donor, don’t care ‘bout you despite being u’r owner/
You don’t exist to me, son, so low personals, and high flow, u ‘n’ PX’ll still get a boner/

Why u Not On For Long anyway?/
Maybe ya GF’s on ya dong today/

Take a break, homie. Let her read this rap/
While ya nap, my flow’ll make her ass clap/(oh snap)

Jokes, son, jokes. We both know if I cared, I’d raid ya ****, no warrant/
I mean I coulda dropped on ya last night but sleep was more important/

And why I gotta son you when deep down you know u wan’ roll w/ my crew?/
Like every hater, ya come back later, sending PMs and emails calling me “boo”/

The truth is, you’re beneath me. Go hard on a nobody? What kinda drug you on?/
I’ve Battled a Killer w/ a Duce up his asshole, put a Blazed axe to Kam and Kwon/

I’ll stick a 22 to to ya chest, dare you to test, ‘n’ mastectomy both breasts for fun/

Please tell me ya didn’t bring a lady razor to battle a SysOperator/
I’m came strapped, suicide vest wired to my mental detonator/
I go off. BOOM. Over. Ya chewed up ‘n’ spit out like a Now & Later/
Leave you shaking like ya got “hysteria” ‘n’ discovered a vibrator/
Set ya skull up on my shelf like it’s a trophy from Predator/
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Default Re: Sunday Rap Battles: Head-2-Head (Week 1)

Lux wants you all to know he thought this was a character battle, so it has some Bison vs Wolverineness to it.

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Yall thinks his lyrics are the ocean I put my cape over that puddle
Watch me bob and weave through his punch lines so subtle

Your two slow I shin Wrap and off your liquid ill only grow
into that apple tree that you envy darley so.

I see you hissing through the grass, staring at Eve’s ass
Waiting for her to pass so you can whisper Hells wrath.

A Wolverine? Well you ant what you seem
You gone here a bitch when I make him scream

He can’t remember his past so ahead he couldn’t see
That, Dawg I’m the whole tree dubya tee eff is a liquid snake to me?

How can you not see how I over shadow(slayer) you effortlessly.
Next H-2-H for my Pyscho bars I should charge you a fee

You think your lyrics hot who’s gassing this liquid up?
His vapors only wrinkle my writing paper, he ant lethal enough.

I ant tryna kill liquid though, I’m just tryna drive the hearse.
Pour him out of his plastic bottle ,Step on this puddle and make him one with the earth,

I know in his verse. I mean bars. He gone try to get real lyrical and reach far.
Your T-Rex arms, reminds me why I should stay calm and detonate a skull-crush-dive BOMB!

Death comes in three's I got your whole life in my palm
I’m uploading it indirect and buffering it through my arms.

He thinks he ready for me so he tried to rush.
Your adamantium bones ant no thing to my Shin pyscho crush, You Made duce blush

cause off the wrong touch, This pyscho field will turn into a blood gulch
You’ll see how my power makes me so clutch.

Off of some online record you think he’s a threat?
Between me and you there’s a difference between real life and online rep.

I know your weak spots and where your emotions get renovated
You can try and play it off like these Shotokan candy rhymes never penetrated

But you gone feel it now or later, my gift of bliss is belated
You can’t Picture this Pyscho Crusher being perforated!

......


Big Boss, I’m Big Boss. Liquid you don’t even amount to solid. So You lost….
Big Boss, Yeah I'm a Big Boss. Liquid yous a vegetarian getting your salad tossed (for lol's)
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Im upset, why Fist giving me a weak one?
Damn son, Now I have to go schooling my grandson
I told dude not to reply, keep your bars, dont unfolded
I'll put my lyrical ammo away, for this "Lux" aint "Loaded" - (Get it?)
This a "slaughter house", I'll have his life ending with "proof"
Taking the throne of this "All-Mighty", and I aint talkin about Bruce
I know lux is retarted, Its noticeable when he puts Jay-Z before Nas
Saying either was whack, but he aint mean that, He just wanted to Rockafella
but let me get back to this acapella, before I go and rock this fella
Creating a circle of lyrics, "spittin" effects faster than a chopper's propeller - (Get it?)
Lux aint living a luxury life, far from it. its just make believe
He did a front and got punched, had him leaning slower then the matrix weave
This homo's life is moving in slow mo, talking dummer than fat joe's flow "You gotta flow joe"
With me? Thats a no no, Have my mans bound him up, strip him naked before he screams for po po
When I seen lux, my mans mistake him for an ape, so he tossed him a banana
I swear it looked like a scene to where all the white girls kiss up on Hanna Montana
The way his face perked out, was weird, looked like he was stuffed with some botox
Like Nicki's ass, but only worse, a cross figure of lady gaga face melting in a hot box
I'll make death luxurious on this kid, an unseen factor for this matter, like a definition of flux
Similar to Milwaukee, wasn't nothing about y'all luxury, till you started whoring for bucks - (Get it?)
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Default shad0wslayer vs Pakistani

Verses in the order they were sent.

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These are some wack bars..
Lil wayne swag.. I strum a guitar.

Pak you might win this batte but i dont care.
im a baller like the cats not wearing underwear.

Come on dog you don't want no drama.
I know you not voting for obama for what he did to osama.

that was kinda racist but this is a last minute thing.
its 11:52 and i words I put together i cant think.

will i lose this battle???? prolly.
Paki if i still win then your just sorry.

Nah screw that im about to go lati and get mad serious for no reason.
im hunting this deer like its open season.

its oppisite day... pak how about you turn blue and go ghost.
its 11:58 and i know im toast./

lyrical miracles!!!!!!
Pakistani wants you all to know he didn't rip my line about shadow boxing, the bold emphasis is also his.

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Shadow the daytime stalker, sup, he my bitch
I turn him ‘on’ and ‘off’ with a simple light switch

Even the comic fantasizer Batcules has me on his mind
Mr. Tit Fists, open fist on Ms. Pak’s tits, other on his pip, twined

They aren’t too different tho. I jack off seeing girl, ye a damn hotty
Shadow sees ‘n jacks off to me, Mr. Tit fist too while Ducing on the potty

T-rue fists up his ass daily cuz man this guy a champion manslayer
He got ****ed by Batman and Hercules at the same time like a celeb pimpin’ player

He’s damn strong drinking nut juice everyday like he’s on a mellow vacation
No honey-bucket-o-bathroom, high up sun, side of the building with shadow and yellow lactation

Ya no one messes with his swagg. He’s pro at this ****
Dude got mad balls for sustaining everyone’s spit

He got freaked out with my whack verse and rhyme for duce
Refused me for not asking him ‘nicely’ guess he didn’t want to lose

I’m over with my introduction. How about I start to produce
I still ain’t ask him ‘nicely’, but now its ON and he can’t refuse

Shadowslayer, a *** ass player, “kinda cute” says Cwing our equally *** mayor
Say your prayer, cuz you’re not a stayer, after I’m done you’ll want to put on some Bayer
And, just so you know, I’m past being a slayer (SFO) let alone be a pathetic shadow slayer.

Shadow boxes with Tit fists while I hit him Lee’s Shadow Fists
I break his jewel box, KO’d, as in a knock off, so y you hella pissed? (get it, the knock off has dual meaning here )

Fahrenheit 451… its hot Martin-i burned Shadowslayer like he was paper, easy
My bar pair is a drop of a-bomb and this bitch is burned on the wall turned sleazy

I’ll be serious, this ain’t my best, I ain’t even trying. I could refine this and be ruthless
But then I think, hmm. Shadow bein’ as big as a moon can’t eclipse me. He weightless.

So I’ma take a nap and go to sleep cuz like I said shadow is my bitch
*Shadow here crying, cuz he can’t sleep. Paki leaves on the switch*
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half of px want u on all fours grabbing your hips
**** even Solid asked about them **** sucking lips


Lmaooooo
Wowwwww hahaha

I meant to put ice salesman instead of water, oh well


yours was good, it flowed great, and you consistently attacked me
I spelled tails wrong, should be tales...doh lmao

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lol i thought you would go all out duce i feel unworthy but yours was good only decent one i had was last one

Old forklore tails about heros is the only time you'll see Rob'in hood

i lol at that
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Oh ship. I thought this H-2-H was character based? Thus why I tried to edit mine around to make it Bison vs. Wolverine.

Anyways, Roberts last Bar LMFAOOOOOO
I liked Duces stuff more, The similes, and comparisons were nice. Closer than I thought but Duce GMV.
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Oh ship. I thought this H-2-H was character based? Thus why I tried to edit mine around to make it Bison vs. Wolverine.

Anyways, Roberts last Bar LMFAOOOOOO
I liked Duces stuff more, The similes, and comparisons were nice. Closer than I thought but Duce GMV.
You can still PM the H2H before today's end.
Do that.
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You can still PM the H2H before today's end.
Do that.
I already PM'd yesterday, and ahh idc I made it character based a bit.
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Vote : Robert
His flow was way better, some sentences were off by a bit but thats normal after saying so much words. then end felt bad, but the beginning and middle was just on point, good rhymes, not too big sentences. rhymes at the end as they should be.

silver_ken was also a good one to hear, but somehow too many words diluted each sentences sending us off beat. i think the real problem is the many words, maybe too much on a single sentence. should be shorter. his rhymes were mostly in the middle of the sentence. at the beginning the end sentences do not even rhyme, it slike hes changing subject mid way. still not a bad one, just too much words and rhymes should be more focused at the end of the sentence not in the middle.

based on flow only, roberts get it, both made mistakes but roberts rhytmn was just perfect here.
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Not going to take away from your vote.
Having rhymes within a sentence isn't a rap thing. It happens in poems all the time.
Also, accordingly and in store for me do rhyme. Other than that. Thanks for your ovte
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His flow was way better, some sentences were off by a bit but thats normal after saying so much words. then end felt bad, but the beginning and middle was just on point, good rhymes, not too big sentences. rhymes at the end as they should be.

silver_ken was also a good one to hear, but somehow too many words diluted each sentences sending us off beat. i think the real problem is the many words, maybe too much on a single sentence. should be shorter. his rhymes were mostly in the middle of the sentence. at the beginning the end sentences do not even rhyme, it slike hes changing subject mid way. still not a bad one, just too much words and rhymes should be more focused at the end of the sentence not in the middle.

based on flow only, roberts get it, both made mistakes but roberts rhytmn was just perfect here.
I'm only quoting this because you need to be ban from voting....

Duce had way better metaphors and at times it was like robert was just trying to rhyme. He was decent all around but not on the same skill level as duce.

.... Damn i sound like im poll jocking

anyways.... Duce GMV
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i like when robert presented his with stanzas, it can easily be read
although both delivered very well in their pieces...

gotta dig duce's last lines:
Let's make fun of your perfect bar, under new member it says P
That means You're a Pathetic Physically Puny Punk Probably


robert's is good as well:
Jump in this battle with your bat "sting"
ima go rock hard call me The Thing
"its clobbering time" is what ill sing
while strangling u with ur own purse string

robert got my vote due to the physicality and power of his lines, how he would hurt duce, and all etc.

although when it comes to mocking and taunting, duce is a pro

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ROb: 4 standza i thought was weak Not needed at all. I like that you anticipated that he'll talk about your weight

Ken/Duce.. your potato lines were weak,
I expected more blunt punch lines from you though


But this is H2H..Robert, I felt like you were just talking/rhyming. My vote goes to Duce/Ken
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Sending my bars in now.

Edited: Duce got my vote, I like the complex stuff that he had more.

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Lol. I literally just wrote my set.

Couldn't get time before.

Will be up before the deadline, which is minutes away.
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I thought the dead line was monday 12.am?

0_o did you mean tuesday lmao
So I rushed for nothing? 0_o
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Lol. I literally just wrote my set.

Couldn't get time before.

Will be up before the deadline, which is minutes away.
Same here lol, when I PM'ed you the bars it was just made xD. I didn't even know this topic was up lol.

Edited:

Mine vs TFist is up, nice bars bro. Obviously can't vote on my own battle, reading LS vs Lux now.

Edited 2:
A VERY good battle, prob the best battle that came up so far. But my vote goes to LS, basically for the same reason why I voted duce. It was really complex compared to Lux's angle, although Lux made the slip up since he thought it was a character battle his bars was still good.

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Duce, no. I extended it for what's Robert, remember? lol.

I said 12 AM EST Tuesday, which is (or was since I got up, came back) minutes away.

I will have to read and vote tomorrow or later, no time now, guys. Good showing. We almost got all battles down.

Pakistani? Where are your bars man? SEND THEM.

Shad0w sent his.

Poll closed by the way. I thought I would be able to add more poll options, but it only allows the addition of two poll options to an already existing poll. Fail.

Everyone will have to vote by a post with explanations (which is ideal anyway).

I did however read NOFL's bars...man...I'm mad at you right now. Lol. But I like you dude. Flow-wise, it was nice. You lean toward the storyteller side (which I do, too). I like that you didn't abandon your integrity points. Good drop. I had more written, but I will post later. Let everyone vote/have their say.

@ Your last post, I should add that MOST of it was written just now. The last 8 lines I'd written either this morning or last night on a notepad. Everything else, mad dash/just now.
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I did however read NOFL's bars...man...I'm mad at you right now. Lol. But I like you dude. Flow-wise, it was nice. You lean toward the storyteller side (which I do, too). I had more written, but I will post later. Let everyone vote/have their say.
I'm tryna cover all bases man lol, it's hard to predict what your gona come with so I didn't want you to be able to exploit me with the "Your so predictable" route lol. I'd rather have the voters just read both of ours and go with what they like haha, it's a smoove battle though xD.

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^Indeed. Imma shut up and let people vote.

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Men your bars were so awesome. now thats what you should f brought to the shadow fight.
my favorite:"NOFL? Oh, hell. Oh, dear. Another rookie rear ‘bout to say hello to
/"
that was beastly. flows right, i do think your lines are a bit too long, but im wondering if its not just me trying to make em to short.

NOFL, its a damn nice try, but i think you could of gone higher, attack his actual weaknesses not just diss him telling him what he can and cannot do. be more aggressive, attack his weaknesses and how you see him. i like the fact that you didn't insult him though. prooves that it can be done without going too far. a damn nice try there, but TFist bars are just more powerfull, fearcefull. my favorite bars in your thing...

First round, and I'm already up against a major threat.
I'm a real man so before battle..you know, I'll pay my respect.

they were great really out of your heart, it was cool.









Lux and Snake, im leaning toward snake here...
tell you what, im not sure so i'll just wait and take more time reading...
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