Dead Space

**DwAyN3** · 09-19-2013, 10:53 PM

**shad0wslayer** · 09-20-2013, 02:02 AM

I like it but I think its a little to dark but at the same time the darkness fits in with the dead space theme

**-OKB-ShadowX** · 09-20-2013, 01:01 PM

it's great,i like it

Wolfeh · 09-25-2013, 11:30 AM

On top of the last review I did, I also have to say that you rely WAY too much on C4D.

Take a break and work on your brush strokes. Be an artist, not just a tagger.

SSJKarma · 09-25-2013, 05:03 PM

Great works, realy goes well into the dead space theme...
unfortunately background is the same as forground and we know the space itself shouldn't be the same color as the charcaters. i like how the light makes the character parts stand out though, aybe you could highlight the character more with such lights. dont know how though... again just a thought on it all. but i again think the character needs to stand a bit more out.

**DwAyN3** · 09-25-2013, 05:43 PM

thanks wolf and karma i'll keep working on it

**bloodpack** · 10-06-2013, 05:20 AM

i agree with karma
this image should mainly highlight the center character
the background shouldnt steal the attention from the main image, on this case, both are trying to beat one from the other
also, find yourself a focal point/direction where your background is heading

otherwise, impressive creativity and use of highlights
keep it up!

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09-19-2013, 10:53 PM	#1
DwAyN3 VIP Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: NY Posts: 2,398 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 85 Rep Power: 5226	Dead Space

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-OKB-ShadowX Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: France Age: 21 Posts: 100 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 11 Rep Power: 2603	Re: Dead Space it's great,i like it __________________

09-25-2013, 11:30 AM	#4
Wolfeh Banned Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: In the hall of olden dreams Age: 31 Posts: 7,312 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 1337 Rep Power: 0	Re: Dead Space On top of the last review I did, I also have to say that you rely WAY too much on C4D. Take a break and work on your brush strokes. Be an artist, not just a tagger.

09-25-2013, 05:03 PM	#5
SSJKarma Banned Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Canada somewhere in the province of quebec Age: 39 Posts: 18,619 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 1 Rep Power: 0	Re: Dead Space Great works, realy goes well into the dead space theme... unfortunately background is the same as forground and we know the space itself shouldn't be the same color as the charcaters. i like how the light makes the character parts stand out though, aybe you could highlight the character more with such lights. dont know how though... again just a thought on it all. but i again think the character needs to stand a bit more out.

09-25-2013, 05:43 PM	#6
DwAyN3 VIP Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: NY Posts: 2,398 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 85 Rep Power: 5226	Re: Dead Space thanks wolf and karma i'll keep working on it

10-06-2013, 05:20 AM	#7
bloodpack Super Advanced Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Philippines Posts: 1,896 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0 Post Thanks / Like Chats: 37 Rep Power: 6950	Re: Dead Space i agree with karma this image should mainly highlight the center character the background shouldnt steal the attention from the main image, on this case, both are trying to beat one from the other also, find yourself a focal point/direction where your background is heading otherwise, impressive creativity and use of highlights keep it up!

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