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Old 05-30-2017, 05:39 PM   #1
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Hey all,

Currently I'm in the process of making designs again, I've got some work coming up on a bigger scale than the below, but I thought I would start with some tags in an attempt to get my mojo back!

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It's too clean.

Needs some dirt to give it personality.

4/10.

DEF not your best work, bruh.
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Thanks Wolf

Definitely think I'm lacking depth in this one
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Old 05-30-2017, 06:02 PM   #4
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I haven't done anything GFX related in a very long time. Infact, I use photoshop mainly to edit, so I might not have the talent or eye to say anything really constructive, other than that the end result is extremely safe compared to how you once were. Might've taken you some time, but it looks like a quick editing job.

But if you really want the nitty gritty from my perspective:


I really like the lines and cloud effect you got going on. The gradient is dope and the color balance between your whites and reds are light but in tune with your piece. I guess my only issue is with Akuma. He's pretty jarring to what you've established in the background. I like how you blended in the lines into Akuma but at the same time the brightness of the piece makes the shadows of Akuma look extremely out of place. I'm positive it's the picture of Akuma as the focal point that really hurts the piece. I think maybe blending him in more (rather than having him almost appear out of nowhere) would help the piece far more than what you got right now.
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Sup.

Lens flare top middle, lines, color and depth.

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I haven't done anything GFX related in a very long time. Infact, I use photoshop mainly to edit, so I might not have the talent or eye to say anything really constructive, other than that the end result is extremely safe compared to how you once were. Might've taken you some time, but it looks like a quick editing job.

But if you really want the nitty gritty from my perspective:


I really like the lines and cloud effect you got going on. The gradient is dope and the color balance between your whites and reds are light but in tune with your piece. I guess my only issue is with Akuma. He's pretty jarring to what you've established in the background. I like how you blended in the lines into Akuma but at the same time the brightness of the piece makes the shadows of Akuma look extremely out of place. I'm positive it's the picture of Akuma as the focal point that really hurts the piece. I think maybe blending him in more (rather than having him almost appear out of nowhere) would help the piece far more than what you got right now.
Agreed, the Akuma stock I used has this ball ache of design to it.

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Lens flare top middle, lines, color and depth.

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DM, long time indeed bro, was hoping you wouldn't of had to see this crap

Catch up is long over due!
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Updated;




Think I'll leave this one alone and start on something else
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I like v2.

Huge improvement.
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Btw I LOVE your txt placement.
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