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Old 12-09-2007, 06:27 PM   #1
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CHOOSE ONE PERSON FROM EACH BRACKET THAT YOU THOUGHT CAME THE HARDEST, AND BARS WERE THE BEST..


Rightous~(E)Pip(H)any * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * vs
TitaniumFist * * * * * * * * * * (NEEDS JUDGING)
* * vs
Mr-Kwon * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
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DaiRugah
* * * vs * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
CarryTheCross * * * * * * * * * *(NEEDS JUDGING)* * * * *
* * *vs
°SykWITit° *
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DaLegendKilla
* * vs
Hugovaz * * * * * * * * * * * * * *(NEEDS JUDGING)
* * vs
*~H~Blaze(didn't have bars,so its between Hugo, and DLK)
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the first way I had it was a bit complicated... Okay... If you've already voted... here whats you do... Edit your post... and give you opinion on the other 2 battles and Vote for 3 people(one from each battle bracket),and explain.. or Quote which line you liked the best which have gave them an Edge...That will be all..vote plz.. it would be greatly appreciated

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Old 12-09-2007, 06:28 PM   #2
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~~~~LET THE VOTING BEGIN~~~~~
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i'm so confused right now/
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Old 12-09-2007, 06:31 PM   #4
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i gotta vote for RE.

love da word play, seriously
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Old 12-09-2007, 06:33 PM   #5
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LoL... I dont want the judging and rapping to be in the same thread.. that would cause so much confusing.. and to have its own judging topic people would notice it more.. trust me... basically give a Run-down on each set of bars... and tell there flaws, there goods and bads..and what they could make better basically....and just incase you didnt know...Titanium bars are first..then Game...than Mine..(R-E)
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Carry; I believe you are supposed to provide a detailed response explaining why you voted the way you did.
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&quot;F**K T-F I reign wit an Iron Fist,wen I Spit it makes u tear up like Lime in Midst/
Kwon you cud never be a Lyricist,not even a Little Bit you squirt Bitch Fits from your Clitoris/&quot;
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Edit:

Titanium Vs. Mr. Kwon Vs. R.E.

Titanium:
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Quote[/b] ] R-E hop in a tub wit’ a toaster and flip da switch/
It’s the easy fix for your death wish, cure for ya’ suicide itch/
I'm pretty sure that was my favorite line. I say pretty sure because there were some lines in the middle of your drop that had the potential to be hot, but for some reason didn't come through. I don't know if it is the word filter or just that you played down your skill because of the format/quality of TCs in this tournament, but I didn't think you came as hard as you have in the past (I have one particular battle in mind ). Try not to force an in-rhyme; it just complicates your flow. That makes two battles in a row now, TF, that you have underestimated your opponents. I'll give you credit for dropping first and that R.E. had to extend the deadline so he could drop his bars.

Mr. Kwon:
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Quote[/b] ] Why you wanted a battle, I'm giving it too you with feeling./
I'm America's most wanted, I'm sure to kill you without concealing./
It hurts dosen't it, the 4 slugs to the chest like you biggie./
My idol, but you imitate his death when I held that 50./
Die slow and think good thoughts when your chest is weaving./
Die hard with those thoughts of one day achieving./
I liked how you pieced this ending together. I don't think it was particularly devastating for your opponents, but it sounded nice, nonetheless. I've seen your drops in the cypher and the one area where you deserve credit is being consistent in dropping bars and putting out insightful material. However, I feel you need work in your punchlines. You shouldn't worry about messing up your flow too much at first; just concentrate on wordplay, in-rhymes and multis. Also, you gotta come harder with your metaphors; people eat that ish up. Not bad though.

R-E:

Well, this is ironic because I am deducting a point from you because you needed to extend the deadline to drop your bars. That being said, I thought you had the best drop in your trio; it's clear you are the more experienced rhymer in this tournament (with the exception of Ru, who just always seems to come half-ass because he doesn't give anyone credit...haha). Good use of in-rhymes, metaphors, similes and your flow was on point for the most part.

That being said, in my opinion, TF and R-E tie and should go a second round of one drop each.

Honestly, put a lock on the second round until you start getting some votes. Can't the battlers vote in matches they didn't drop in?



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Old 12-10-2007, 06:56 PM   #9
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ROUND 2 IS ABOUT TO START.....but this evaluation topic im sure we will get done.... so round 2 is officially about to start.. but don't disregard thIS round 1 judging thread.. come here 2 vote...



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Old 12-11-2007, 06:10 PM   #10
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I think TF came in good..lol an nwo.. btw RE how come you only have 1 post and you posted several times?
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&quot;rightous gmv&quot;
&quot;carrythecross gmv&quot; quoting dalegendkilla... give a reason why you voted for who ya did lol...
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Oh yeah...no d**k riding votes. Remember it was a three way battle.
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Old 12-13-2007, 10:15 PM   #13
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Lol, you still didn't answer my question.. :/
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Quote[/b] (~OL~AvengedWolf @ Dec. 11 2007,19:10)]I think TF came in good..lol an nwo.. btw RE how come you only have 1 post and you posted several times?
Because he has been posting in R.I. Stop spamming up the threads with dumb questions.
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Quote[/b] (3videncE @ Dec. 14 2007,10:16)]
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Quote[/b] (~OL~AvengedWolf @ Dec. 11 2007,19:10)]I think TF came in good..lol an nwo.. btw RE how come you only have 1 post and you posted several times?
Because he has been posting in R.I. Stop spamming up the threads with dumb questions.
Oh, calm down I wasn't spamming I voted didn't I? And wow one spam..lol anyways this is RI... :/ spamming wouldn't matter here :/
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Come on people... Lets get some more votes in
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Old 12-16-2007, 11:26 PM   #17
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um...I don't know who came the hardest

ask Jake...he's been with every person on this list
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Duce, this will never work unless some people start showing some initiative. Since you are hosting the tournament, it would nice to see you vote.
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Old 12-17-2007, 05:33 PM   #19
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well can somebody vote on my battle plese =/
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Old 12-17-2007, 05:54 PM   #20
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okay... my vote...ima edit this..lemme go re-read the battles


Syk vs Ru vs CTC break down....

CTC: you had probably the best Wordplay.... but you didn't really get personal.... your punchlines was okay... 1-10..your bars get a... 6..you lacked nameplay btw....

RU: you had the best flow to me... like ctc.. you lacked Name Play......ya bars get... a 6.5..I liked ya flow...like ctc ya lacked Name play...

SYK: .. the best verse to me... he included name play..had a descent flow.. descent word play... ya bars get a 7.....

SYK gmv...

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Hugo vs DLK break down:

Hugo: lol I liked some of your bars.. bro..believe it or not.....but your flow was extended.. your bars get... a 5.5 bro.. ya had better punchlines....

DLK: had a better and shorter flow.... but kinda lacked personals.. your bars get a 5...

HUGO GMV....



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Nice vote, R-E. I thought we'd see TF vote in here...
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First post edited: Link to original battles for viewing before votes. Read and vote people. (Thread locked btw.)

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CarryTheCross, R-E, and Dalengendkilla gmv

they were the ones who stood out the most, especially with their punchlines.
It was close with titanium though.

The others were either too long, or too short
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^There was a length restriction. Also, haha, this was a three way battle and Carry the Cross dropped one bar that was directed at ONE of his opponents. Anyway...lol

--Clearly Syk needs to go back to breaking down the meanining of everyone single one of his bars.



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3videncE, you are raggin' on the only vote we've had in a while lol. And she's among many who got pm's from either myself or R-E. Voting is just not happening.

Your best lines DaiRugah:

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Quote[/b] ] devil from da underground bettah go 2 church
want real bars go to underground an do a search
we 2 hood 4 you b1+ches gotta a n1kka bored
ruger 2 da computer i'll blow up your board
Your style is usually to keep it short and smooth, complete with quick hard punchlines and a level of flow that makes it look easy.( Which it isn’t for everyone.) I didn’t see any negatives but one, you could have concentrated more on really destroying your opponents. Your opening line already stated you didn’t really give it all you had and you even do this on DU.



CarryTheCross, your best lines:

Quote:
Originally Posted by [b
Quote[/b] ]Lyrical Minds, Mixed with militant Rhymes We were designed to show u bitch *****s how to shine/
We taxin dat ass, Rappin against me, you just earned yourself a Fine/
You had decent rhymes and your punchlines stung in areas a bit hard. Your flow fell apart at times when you let a line go on for ages. *Example:

Quote:
Originally Posted by [b
Quote[/b] ] You must be with stupid,because your bitch sure is I bust in her mouth And she said, so it takes 9 months to make a kid?
Another line that fell flat and shows your biggest overall problem:

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Originally Posted by [b
Quote[/b] ]And if you think your comeback is harder then mines? U think your gonna beat mines? poop you might beat it, o by the way i forgot to say SykWitit(like yo name) =o hahaha
You were facing two opponents and you really only addressed one. One time at the end for that matter. You didn’t attack RU period when the rest of us had to use our pieces to battle two opponents. You might have misread how the first round worked, but you also made no attempt to redo your post. Between your opponents your piece is the weakest.



Your best lines °SykWITit° :

Quote:
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Quote[/b] ]Then I'll crucify your remains and truly make you &quot;a divine loss&quot;/Atrocious, like I started a Jynocide/ Or Ru's mom leaning over to take it on the side/ Lactate that bitch when I let the Steel slide/ Transform her into a corpse, call me Ironhide
A lot of creative wordplay in the first half, a good amount of punchlines in the last half but this piece was a little below your average. Maybe I’ve become accustomed to seeing you use everything including the kitchen sink.

This 3-way was really a 2-way between °SykWITit° and DaiRugah.

DaiRugah gets my vote. His flow was sick and his “Ya’ll suck” attitude worked for the piece. Simplicity overruled complexity in this one for me.






Your best lines hugovaz:

Quote:
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Quote[/b] ] About time i start dropping some new hot shi*, light up this forum so everybody could see my new outfit/
By outfit i mean my lirically new style let the beat ride while i hold a tight grip on my point fourty five caliber all up in your waist, load the whole clip up Blazes and DaLegends ass until they could feel it in there face ha/..
That was about as hard as you hit your opponents, everything else was a bit weaker. You need to concentrate on your construction. Just because this is a rap-battle doesn’t mean you don’t have to take some time to consider how to construct your work so it has an appeal to the reader. You have a knack for creative wordplay mixed in with your punchlines and you seem like you’re having fun. Take your time in future and it will improve your work.


Your best lines da legend killa:

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Quote[/b] ] Putting me with them is like two crackheads chained in prison BINDS/
Thanks alot rightous you pretty much got me time for FLAMING/
Light them fools up,100% death even if im not AIMMING/
This match is just a warm up to light my IGNITION/
*Clat Clat*BOOM now yo ass back the defensive POSITION/
Your construction / composition was better than hugo’s but your rhymes and punchlines were weaker. He also showed more creativity than you imo.

Hugovaz gmv.
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